Alright imma read it. Will add an edit after finishing! :D
EDIT: I read it! It's so good! It's obvious that you put a lot of research on it! Like with the leg and knife hieroglyph :D
I'm not a native speaker and you learnt me a new word: "psionic"!
There was funny moments too! The characters are very well written, the captain already seemed weak spirited, no wonder he got distracted by the prize and got the answers wrong!
The helicopter scene reminds me of 80's 90's mangas, and it does fit the era the story is taking place!
AMAZING WORK :D